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jadecavy
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 Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:08 am Post subject: Maailma: Fabrication of Radiance |
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As you may have seen in my signature, I am currently working on a project in RMXP (RPG Maker XP). I am experinced with the program, and have a story, however I need to find out what people think so that I can improve it. Could anyone possibly look over it here and tell me what you think? Thanks!
PS- Can anyone but Greg tell me what "Fabrication of Radiance" means, based on the game so far?  None of my friends got it right away.
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Naardaas
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I got it right away.
I find it interesting that you use this forum to showcase your game.
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jadecavy
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It's not advertising, it's more to get everybody's ideas and to see what people think. I need suggestions on improvement and such. It's not like I'm gaining from anyone veiwing my project, as it will be a free game when it comes out. So it's not really advertising.
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Naardaas
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Meh, true enough.
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jadecavy
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That's right. Meh. Greg, you didn't get it right away. You said it was a stupid title and I had to explain it to you in french. 
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Naardaas
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No you didn't. I understood what the words meant when you said them; what was unxclear to me was your motive for naming it such.
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jadecavy
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Oh yes. It was Dominick that didn't undertand it. Now it makes sense to you though, right?
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Yep.
Oh, and in future, please do not confuse me with him.
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| Genma no Ou wrote: | | Oh, and in future, please do not confuse me with him. |
Not even a please? You really that insulted? I was confuzzled and tired....
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| Genma no Ou wrote: | | Oh, and in future, please do not confuse me with him. |
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