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Naardaas
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I don't care if it's the same. I just have to redeem myself for what I've done. And the next Chapter I post can explain it all.
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Aarikku
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Post if you want, but I've told you I'm done reading it.
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Naardaas
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You realy disliked it that much? What did I do wrong?
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Aarikku
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Let's see...
-You used Noble Dragon, though I asked you not to even before you started writing.
-You used Elements, though I asked you not to before you started writing.
-The above points made it seem like a carbon copy of Shmod Saga.
-Marcel seemed like a carbon copy of... MARCEL.
-Extremely generic characters made it hard to connect to any of them.
-There was a lot of over-the-top seriousness for a series based on card games.
-You kept trying to make stuff up about my cards, almost all of which was completely contrary to how I decided they would go. (Can't really blame you for that, since you didn't know what I had intended for them)
I think that's about it.
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Naardaas
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Ah. I see.
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