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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote




Am I missing any? Oh, and I just noticed - they're all facing the left.



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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Androgynous Voice: Yes! My archetype lives! Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And you've created monsters that aren't dragons! They don't even resemble dragons! I'm so proud.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That makes me so happy, and yet so sad, to hear.

Oh, in addition to the afforementioned 4 cards, future cards include Fennec Fox and Fox Valley.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

'kay. Oh, and feel free to make a Fox Speaker. It is an animal-based type, after all.

Level 2, 2300/2000, Humanoid, with a bunch of effects. And a staff resembling a key feature of foxes.

One other thing, you're on the right track of Level ratios. Don't mess it up.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I won't. Fennec Fox is Level One, none of my remaining Foxes exceed Level Two, I'm giving them a searcher (do you want it to be another statue?), and yeah, I'll give them a Speaker.

Anything else?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No reason for it to be a Statue. Check out Mechanical Snake. Though if you want, why not?

What else to recommend...? As always, watch the token producing. Easy Mana is a dangerous business. But it looks like you've got things under control.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good news for you is, most of my remaining cards are about USING the Mana produced, not making more.

Oh, this is the effect for Fox Force. Tell me if it's too strong.

(Cost Two) Fox Force
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Equip only to a Fox. It gains 200 STK for each of your Fox-Tail Mana Tokens (max. 1600). If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, play a Fox with a lower Level from your Deck.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you put a max on the ATK it can gain, say, 1600, it'll be fine.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay.

One more warning, about the speaker. With Foxes, I'm making it female... and I tend to make my females bustier than you do.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uh oh. Just keep them smaller than the head.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't draw hentai-style girls. They will be smaller than the head. And pretty much fully-covered.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, but I reserve the right to get my sister to see how degrading said picture is to her gender.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not sexist, you do know that right? And this is a childern's card game. I do have morals and a conscience, although my friends may beg to differ; but I'm not in it to degrade people.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Then you shouldn't have to warn me.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know that I had to; I'm just being precautious. I know how you are about stuff like this.

I'll keep my drawing PG. But still cool.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You do that.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And in the meanwhile, I'll continue to formulate Fox stuff.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, one last thing. No matter how hard I try, I always default to a manga hairstyle. So don't be surprised if my speaker looks like she got her hair cut at Chez Yubel's.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm. You could always pull a 'Core Princess Andromeda' and have the hair wave behind her.

Ah well. Anime's okay in moderation.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Did you get Fox Blast okay?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yep. But I'm gonna need a rarity for it.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 6:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uncommon. The effect is too powerful for a Common, but the Rare slots are booked. And it's not Secret Rare good.

Oh, and I'm thinking the same for Fox Force.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, but there's only 11 Uncommons in your set too - five of which are now Foxes. Maybe you should make it bigger.

...Aaand I don't have an effect for Fox Force. BTW, you can't keep making cards by using the word 'Fox' and then an attacking word. Alas, your creativity.

One last thing - Fox Blast is borderline broken. Or maybe it's just plain broken.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's the effect of it again. And I'll change the card tame.

(Cost Two) Tails of Fury
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Equip only to a Fox. It gains 200 STK for each of your Fox-Tail Mana Tokens (max. 1600). If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, play a Fox with a lower Level from your Deck.

And Blast, yeah. I didn't realize how powerful it was until I looked at it as it's written on a card.I'll make a new effect, and a new name.

(Cost Two) Furri-ous Explosion
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Effect: When a Fox is attacked, you can tap 1 Fox-Tail Mana Token. In that case, at the end of the Battle Phase, destroy the monster that attacked.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

'Kay.

Oh, THAT'S Fox Force. 'Kay, I'll work on it. (I'm also working on an Alternate art Noble Dragon so I can make a Tyson Character deck ^_^)
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, now the two cards have new names.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Furri-ous Explosion looks fine, but you MAY get some unfortunate jokes about the word 'furry'.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's the point of the name. It's a pormanteau and a play on words.
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I said UNFORTUNATE jokes.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meh, whatever.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, the archetype's not complete yet, but there are enough cards to create a Fox deck. I may just post one.

While we're here, what should Lyaerna - Lord of Serpents do?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dunno. There's only, like... three other snakes in the game. And no special Snake archetype, so making it snake support is kinda out.

Well, it's your card, so it's up to you. Just don't make it ridiculous or dumb. Or ridiculously dumb.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I asked because I don't have a clue what I want from it. I said I wanted something Metagame worthy - kinda like what you described Lightning Dragon to be. Although a different effect.

Let's see. What effects are absent or short in Shmod?
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Well, if you're looking for a unique effect, categorizing it is not a good idea.
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No category is fine. A type would be useful; I'll say Earth. The highest decent, easy-to-play Level in Shmod is 3. If the effect is great, than the stats should be medium.

(Level Three) Lyaerna - Lord of Serpents (Earth)
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Snap. Your first Earth monster.

Despite being after making a whole series of foxes...
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Yeah, yeah.

Anyway, my earlier question - what effects are absent from Shmod, or just uncommon in it?
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As I said, if you're categorizing it, it's not unique.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fine... what effects are MISSING from Shmod?
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I dunno. Look, I'm busy. Have to draw Noble Dragon.
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Okay. I'll let you know when I have something.
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Well, I'm id a bind for what to do on the three Warlord Dragon support Dragons; Vaguard, Brigadier, and a new one known as Darkness Dragonling. Aarikku has seen my designs for them and (metaphorically) spat in their faces, so I need new ideas. Any amount of spitballing would be VERY helpful.
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Quote:
6) RIPPING OFF OTHER GAMES

It's hard not to do. Make sure there's enough of a distinction between your cards and other games.


From the Guidelines for Cards thread. Your monsters were exactly like LV monsters.
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I'll admit that one of them was like a LV monster. Brigadier Wyvetn was. But Vanguard Dragon was the standard [Tribute to play [Insert Monster Name Here] from your hand], and Darkness Dragonling was a hand searcher. Neither of those is LV-ish.

And that's not what I asked. I asked for something you'd prefer. That isn't very helpful, since it gives me nothing to play off of.
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They're your cards. You come up with ideas, I'll rate the ideas and make suggestions if I can.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know, but I'm not exactly rolling on alternate ideas. I want something fresh for the Wyvern, something not currently (widely) used here that involves battle (keeping with the military ranking theme). And sadly, that was the only thing I could think of, since I thought it going off instantly was too easy.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, get back to me when you think of another idea.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about:

(Level Three) Brigadier Wyven (DARK)
Category: Dragon
Effect: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by Battle, tribute this card to play 1 [Warlord Dragon] from your deck. It cannot attack this turn.
ATK/ 3400
DEF/ 2100



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